Tofu Binge
Sometimes I'm empty
poetry consumes white space
- my literary eating disorder
Audio fluff & textual filler
with pretty graphic labels
Poetry
Tofu Binge
Sometimes I'm empty
poetry consumes white space
- my literary eating disorder
Audio fluff & textual filler
with pretty graphic labels
I like this a lot - esp. "poetry consumes white space, becomes my literary eating disorder". Well played. I have a nit with 'becomes my literary eating disorder' - for reasons I can't explain...but without it the jist wouldn't be there, and the jist is what rocks.
ReplyDeleteHow about:
ReplyDeleteSometimes I'm empty
poetry consumes white space
- my literary eating disorder
Audio fluff & textual filler
with pretty graphic labels
I think it is wonderful except for the amperand.
ReplyDeleteyeah, that works mucho better-o.
ReplyDeleteI'd be much better off if I learned to spell...the ampersand makes sense after you explained it.
ReplyDeletelol spelling is optional around here Miss V - one of my recent entries sells whatever with a 3! Glad you understand my & now... you know, I think that's peobably the only time I've ever used one in a poem. I rarely use them even in emails and such, lol.
ReplyDeletehow much was it? yes, I'm a smartass...
ReplyDeletelmfao!
ReplyDeleteYeah, thank god sPelling is optional! eh?
Selling however has just risen to an all new high on the important scale... gotta make another post :) :) :)