To Grief
August slips cool into a September porch swing.
Come sit with me and have coffee at 3am.
We'll speak without shame,
for we've been intimate for years -
since you found your place
between my husband's hips and mine.
We are one another's quiet addiction, each
the other's lingering suicide. I recognize
pain, my reflection, in your eyes,
and yet I draw you in.
You are my Marlboro man, here to save me,
but there is too much smoke -
summer stinking and thick with kudzu vows.
Autumn rings on some distant curve,
and with this dreaded friend, I pray.
Together we mourn midnights into dawn
on the whispered tune of our blessings:
Hurry, on the west wind to the seas, move them
with the tarnished arc of the harvest moon.
Tagged: Writing, Poetry, Poetic, Literature, Poem
Sunday, September 18, 2005
To Grief
Posted by Erin at 1:44 AM
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9 comments:
you just plain rock, Madam E. you put a lot of beauty into your affair with grief, and make your poems shine. And, alas, autumn is on its way...dang, we have too much to do before then.
Everytime I come here I start over thinking your prose. However, I enjoy it --and now have a sudden need for a porch swing! Thanks for sharing.
Doug~
I miss you! It just makes my day when you stop by *hug*
Madman~
I would love to hear your thoughts on my poetry, even if you think they're over-thunk thoughts ;)
Personally, I'd rather have you asleep at 3 a.m., but it does make for some fine poetry.
Actually V, I was very asleep at 3am this morning. I had literally had 1 hour sleep in, hell I lost count how many hours I was up ... anyway, I passed out on the couch at 11 last night and slept till 4am. Then Terra had a bad dream at 4 and got up and I couldn't get back to sleep till 7:30, so I went back to bed then and slept till 11 :)
You're talking to a very well rested E.
Glad you liked the poem - it was actually written at 4am lol.
While I disagree with Doug on the approach of autumn (we CRAVE it here), I must agree that the poem is haunting. I keep reading it, sometimes a stanza over and over, and sometimes in whole. It captures me.
It is full of emotion in a sort of undercooled way, but without growing bitterness
I like it
Kudzu vows.
perfect.
there's joy in this pain
Thanks guys. I think this is one of my favorites of my recent work, I'm glad you all enjoyed it as well
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