Because Acceptance is beautiful, and Heaven is overrated.The poetry and musings of Erin Monahan
Secret TidepoolsSecrets shineout of the cay.Sun-pressed starfishhold their treasures -tidepool's gold.
Very good.But as I told Vickie:you see, although not stated in the criteria, only implied by example, a modicum is a continuous stream, rather than broken up by sentences.
lol figures I'd screw it up :)
i like that, e. have you ever read gary snyder?
I don't believe I have Jenni, but if it's a name you mention, I make sure I do :)
Did I mention that this is rich in imagery and has a beautiful sound?It does have a rather smooth flow though. later. ~ James
regardless of period usage, I mean.
An interesting idea and a little like the sedoka and the tanka. I enjoyed the flow of this one and the clarity of the images.