Because Acceptance is beautiful, and Heaven is overrated.The poetry and musings of Erin Monahan
Oooh! Erin I love this! The imagery is SO... THICK! It's absolutely wonderful!Oh, and happy birthday too!! I hope you get all of the fireflies and s'mores you desire.:-)
Hi; my first time here. I'll be coming back. Love that bursting harvest in your last verse. Yvonne is right; it's thick and sweet as syrup or liqueur.
yes yes yes wowthis is so perfect,I like 'hazy' the best,oh and when you say 'my breasts', ooooeee!the poem is awesome too!Happy birthday Erin!
Erin this is just so packed with imagery and originality - I'm envious :-)In the audio i was struck by your use of assonance and alliteration eg.summer has shreddedthe Southern sky - made a montageof Brazilian bits and Caribbean stripsThen the way you personify the landscape ! And finally you paint an amazing picture. Excellent writing!
This is SO GOOD, Erin! Great writing! Hope you had a great 4th of July....
PS Why don't you record this one? Hope your birthday was celebrated with fireworks. :)
Erin, I rarely read anything of yours that I don't find to be a true work of art, but this... this is what poetry is MEANT to be.
Very good. *makes note
This is beauiful, Erin. I keep coming back to read it again. Beautiful.
thick as molasses, I'd say, with wonderful imagery.i savored this.
Oooh! Erin I love this! The imagery is SO... THICK! It's absolutely wonderful!
ReplyDeleteOh, and happy birthday too!! I hope you get all of the fireflies and s'mores you desire.
:-)
Hi; my first time here. I'll be coming back. Love that bursting harvest in your last verse. Yvonne is right; it's thick and sweet as syrup or liqueur.
ReplyDeleteyes yes yes wow
ReplyDeletethis is so perfect,
I like 'hazy' the best,
oh and when you say 'my breasts', ooooeee!
the poem is awesome too!
Happy birthday Erin!
Erin this is just so packed with imagery and originality - I'm envious :-)
ReplyDeleteIn the audio i was struck by your use of assonance and alliteration eg.
summer has shredded
the Southern sky - made a montage
of Brazilian bits and Caribbean strips
Then the way you personify the landscape ! And finally you paint an amazing picture.
Excellent writing!
This is SO GOOD, Erin! Great writing! Hope you had a great 4th of July....
ReplyDeletePS Why don't you record this one? Hope your birthday was celebrated with fireworks. :)
ReplyDeleteErin, I rarely read anything of yours that I don't find to be a true work of art, but this... this is what poetry is MEANT to be.
ReplyDeleteVery good. *makes note
ReplyDeleteThis is beauiful, Erin. I keep coming back to read it again. Beautiful.
ReplyDeletethick as molasses, I'd say, with wonderful imagery.
ReplyDeletei savored this.