Because Acceptance is beautiful, and Heaven is overrated.
The poetry and musings of Erin Monahan
Tuesday, July 4, 2006
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If I spoke a language other than drawl,
I'd have words other than my own
to say blue and green and hazy.
I'd tell you how summer has shredded
the Southern sky - made a montage
of Brazilian bits and Caribbean strips,
woven with a breeze of tropical sea.
With a Bahama-watercolor tongue
I'd paint the shades of my garden
and whisper how the Nile has descended
as a haze too thick to breathe.
But I speak strictly Dixie,
and it's Waxhaw Creek that babbles
over the fall of my backbone
and Lake Wylie that laps at my breasts.
Here,
peach-heavy branches bring the sun down,
and blackberry brambles swallow it whole.
It's strawberries and butternut squash
that climb the evening sky, and day
disappears into a glass of muscadine wine and thunder.
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Oooh! Erin I love this! The imagery is SO... THICK! It's absolutely wonderful!
ReplyDeleteOh, and happy birthday too!! I hope you get all of the fireflies and s'mores you desire.
:-)
Hi; my first time here. I'll be coming back. Love that bursting harvest in your last verse. Yvonne is right; it's thick and sweet as syrup or liqueur.
ReplyDeleteyes yes yes wow
ReplyDeletethis is so perfect,
I like 'hazy' the best,
oh and when you say 'my breasts', ooooeee!
the poem is awesome too!
Happy birthday Erin!
Erin this is just so packed with imagery and originality - I'm envious :-)
ReplyDeleteIn the audio i was struck by your use of assonance and alliteration eg.
summer has shredded
the Southern sky - made a montage
of Brazilian bits and Caribbean strips
Then the way you personify the landscape ! And finally you paint an amazing picture.
Excellent writing!
This is SO GOOD, Erin! Great writing! Hope you had a great 4th of July....
ReplyDeletePS Why don't you record this one? Hope your birthday was celebrated with fireworks. :)
ReplyDeleteErin, I rarely read anything of yours that I don't find to be a true work of art, but this... this is what poetry is MEANT to be.
ReplyDeleteVery good. *makes note
ReplyDeleteThis is beauiful, Erin. I keep coming back to read it again. Beautiful.
ReplyDeletethick as molasses, I'd say, with wonderful imagery.
ReplyDeletei savored this.