tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-10729800.post115984940827494526..comments2023-10-18T20:19:34.717-04:00Comments on Poetic Acceptance: All DayErinhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/06383001784323104995noreply@blogger.comBlogger5125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-10729800.post-1160062930685609312006-10-05T11:42:00.000-04:002006-10-05T11:42:00.000-04:00Simply profound. Your words captures some of the h...Simply profound. Your words captures some of the human heart's greatest fears. Illness, emptiness. Great read.Ms. Dorkhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18142940962223526141noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-10729800.post-1159976886812179952006-10-04T11:48:00.000-04:002006-10-04T11:48:00.000-04:00Thanks for the comments guys.Martin, I had no inte...Thanks for the comments guys.<BR/><BR/>Martin, I had no intentions - it was a rambling thought process in my head the other night. I spell checked, that was all the editing this piece got. I might rework it later, we'll see. Mostly it was a cathartic explosion.<BR/><BR/>Rain~ Thanks sweety!<BR/><BR/>James~ *hug* You 'get' me ALL the time.Erinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06383001784323104995noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-10729800.post-1159927304210014332006-10-03T22:01:00.000-04:002006-10-03T22:01:00.000-04:00This is a free write. that's the whole point. If ...This is a free write. that's the whole point. If she reworked it, then it would cease to be as such. <BR/><BR/>I like it as a free write. And perhaps, it could be more. But, as a free write, awesome!<BR/><BR/>"But that's just my opinion. I could be wrong." ~ Dennis MillerSir James Eric Watkinshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08439184492064693110noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-10729800.post-1159925872533324282006-10-03T21:37:00.000-04:002006-10-03T21:37:00.000-04:00that is some awesomely good poetry Erin.that is some awesomely good poetry Erin.Rainhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13310666391868911676noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-10729800.post-1159913006021702892006-10-03T18:03:00.000-04:002006-10-03T18:03:00.000-04:00Good to see poetry back! I was brought up short b...Good to see poetry back! I was brought up short by the bathos of the lines 'that my hair fell out' and 'It was disconcerting': the phrases seem redolent of the dejected, matter-of-fact, expressionless tone of voice associated with sufferers from depression, but break the fluency of the rest, so that unless that is your intention, I'd rework that bit.Martin Locockhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17198668398629742974noreply@blogger.com