tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-10729800.post113967978554023395..comments2023-10-18T20:19:34.717-04:00Comments on Poetic Acceptance: No - rewriteErinhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/06383001784323104995noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-10729800.post-1139762167523044702006-02-12T11:36:00.000-05:002006-02-12T11:36:00.000-05:00and my problem is that I'm addicted to revision ;)...and my problem is that I'm addicted to revision ;)<BR/><BR/>Do you know how long it's been since I wrote anything that rhymed? <BR/><BR/>I fear it... is it a sign of regression?<BR/><BR/>*says a poet's prayer to avoid rhyming poetry!*Erinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06383001784323104995noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-10729800.post-1139754132907097542006-02-12T09:22:00.000-05:002006-02-12T09:22:00.000-05:00Erin, I thought the original was great, but now th...Erin, I thought the original was great, but now that it's been through a rewrite, I have to say, I see what you meant about it's lyrical quality. This one is so much better! See, that's my problem- I'm a terrible revisionist.Mommyleekhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17791423485316355896noreply@blogger.com