tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-10729800.post112819649516710540..comments2023-10-18T20:19:34.717-04:00Comments on Poetic Acceptance: Not a creation poemErinhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/06383001784323104995noreply@blogger.comBlogger5125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-10729800.post-1128316357692359772005-10-03T01:12:00.000-04:002005-10-03T01:12:00.000-04:00Oh yes.Oh yes.Sir James Eric Watkinshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08439184492064693110noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-10729800.post-1128314888638746212005-10-03T00:48:00.000-04:002005-10-03T00:48:00.000-04:00I'm amazed at the amount of difference those omiss...I'm amazed at the amount of difference those omissions make James, amazed. Consider it done - as well as the same change in S1 L1Erinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06383001784323104995noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-10729800.post-1128313732536928962005-10-03T00:28:00.000-04:002005-10-03T00:28:00.000-04:00This first stanza is so beautiful, it melts into m...This first stanza is so beautiful, it melts into me. Although, I have a small nit (very small) with the second stanza, I am overwhelmed by its depth, its, to me, colored vapor image. The third seamlessly intertwines imagery of bursting fire chest and an almost auditory hallucination, my interpretation. I love the way it ends, one more very small nit there.<BR/><BR/>Now that you intrigued as to Sir James Eric Watkinshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08439184492064693110noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-10729800.post-1128208770687263992005-10-01T19:19:00.000-04:002005-10-01T19:19:00.000-04:00V~Late summer and early fall in NC is backdropped ...V~<BR/>Late summer and early fall in NC is backdropped by the sound of cicadas, this year more than usual because this year was the year that the 14-yr cicadas hatched, so it's just been a constant presence for months. It has seeped into my subconscious I suppose.Erinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06383001784323104995noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-10729800.post-1128200753642604292005-10-01T17:05:00.000-04:002005-10-01T17:05:00.000-04:00Actually, I rather like this. It might be a bit w...Actually, I rather like this. It might be a bit weird, but not too bad. What I find strange is another repetition you've been doing....cicada.Vickiehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08573890783110046304noreply@blogger.com