tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-10729800.post112260384930236601..comments2023-10-18T20:19:34.717-04:00Comments on Poetic Acceptance: DeathErinhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/06383001784323104995noreply@blogger.comBlogger8125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-10729800.post-1123030864000910722005-08-02T21:01:00.000-04:002005-08-02T21:01:00.000-04:00I keep coming back to that rhyme thing (once someo...I keep coming back to that rhyme thing (once someone else pointed it out...lol), I'm dry.Vickiehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08573890783110046304noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-10729800.post-1122856461929445462005-07-31T20:34:00.000-04:002005-07-31T20:34:00.000-04:00but your little picture looks so happy and energet...but your little picture looks so happy and energetic!Erinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06383001784323104995noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-10729800.post-1122856311503401242005-07-31T20:31:00.000-04:002005-07-31T20:31:00.000-04:00I hear ya, E. I don't have much oomf at present e...I hear ya, E. I don't have much oomf at present either.ehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11813174487317834819noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-10729800.post-1122754612166547042005-07-30T16:16:00.000-04:002005-07-30T16:16:00.000-04:00Me too Erin - but for now, "oh well."Me too Erin - but for now, "oh well."Erinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06383001784323104995noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-10729800.post-1122733265032461262005-07-30T10:21:00.000-04:002005-07-30T10:21:00.000-04:00Works much better for me. Now the only thing I ge...Works much better for me. Now the only thing I get snagged on is the last two lines rhyming, but I think that's just me being silly.ehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11813174487317834819noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-10729800.post-1122689884146601692005-07-29T22:18:00.000-04:002005-07-29T22:18:00.000-04:00ooh, that's better...I rather blew by it before fo...ooh, that's better...<BR/><BR/>I rather blew by it before for some unexplained reason. I do like it now. Thanks E2 for seeing what I couldn't.Vickiehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08573890783110046304noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-10729800.post-1122681609941887052005-07-29T20:00:00.000-04:002005-07-29T20:00:00.000-04:00lol it works like that - we call it brainwashing.H...lol it works like that - we call it brainwashing.<BR/><BR/>How's that?Erinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06383001784323104995noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-10729800.post-1122681370826820672005-07-29T19:56:00.000-04:002005-07-29T19:56:00.000-04:00Enjoyas muchas, E. My only nit (not even as big a...Enjoyas muchas, E. My only nit (not even as big as a nit, really, more of a mite - lol) is that it is one looooong sentance. I wouldn't have even picked up on that before someone picked up on it in one of mine. Who knew you Moonies are making me not only a better writer, but a better reader!ehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11813174487317834819noreply@blogger.com